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By Baone Twala - Submitted for YouthTube, by the youth, for the youth | Nov 30, 2011 | COMMENTS [ 5 ]

There’s nothing like being caught in rain storm, Nothing quite like the sharp whistle of the wind as subtle and silent as a whisper

And the loss of balance caused by the rush and gush of his twin sister
Nothing quite like the great loud grumbling growl of lightening crawling through huge heavy brooding storm clouds looking for a way out

The scream inducing sound of cranky cramps creeping through clouds pregnant with gallons of precipitation
Nothing quite like the painful plip and plop of big fat juicy balloon raindrops making contact with exposed skin
The liberating loss of inhibition inverse to the increase in desperation to arrive at your destination
A rainstorm cleanses from without
Releasing multicoloured streams of L’oreal and Maybelline mingled with rainbow riverlets of dove deoderants
And shields that shield from sweat but cannot shelter from rain

No smooth strait relaxed strands,
No store bought brazilian weave brands
No natural, afro blown by hand
When it rains every black girl would rather bury her head in the sand
There are no ladies and gentlemen when you’re caught in a rain storm
No richer or poorer
Or higher or lower
No sinners No saints
Just people Created equal
Heading in heaps to hide under the bus shelter
Rain destroys all traces of the artificial
Man made versus God made
He’ll always win

A Rainstorm cleans better than a Genesis vacuum cleaner filled with OMO machine wash and vanish stain remover
It was a rainstorm that erased all evidence of evil
Leaving the earth super, squeaky, sparkling clean and as shiny as a new penny
Fresh and 99.999999% as pure as the day it was first came forth from the mouth of God
It disappears as quickly and as quietly as it appeared
The huge heavy brooding storm clouds let it all out and part
Revealing God’s seven coloured smile that reminds of the promise“
Never again will I destroy the earth with rain”

Submitted by Baone Twala for YouthTube - By The Youth, For the Youth

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Nov 30, 2011 8:21 | 0 replies

@clivage-morning,no need to (shake my hips)SMH.

Nov 30, 2011 8:48 | 0 replies

Today's summon: False Christians (Mat 7:15-21)

It is better to preach the naked truth that pleases God than propaganda which makes people flattered.

We must watch out for people who pretend to be Christians but inwardly knowing that they are not. They are busy fornicating, practicing witchcraft, having hatred, jelousy, adulterers, backstabbers, etc. The above mentioned is their fruit. A Christian is recognized by his/her fruits.
We've got bloggers who pretend to be Christians but they are easiy recognized because of their fruits.

Those who are from Jesus bears love, patience, self control, etc.
verse 19. their final destiny
• Vs 21
• Vs 22, 23

Let's pray
Heavenly Father we thank you for this day
Help us with the Spirit of discentment
I pray for all suffering from satanic influence
Bless those who read this summon
and give them understanding and good interpretation
in the name of Jesus


Nov 30, 2011 9:20 | 0 replies

Its a nice poem. Well done Baone

Dec 01, 2011 11:14 | 0 replies

@ mosquer
wise words from a true man of God.

We are all the same through our Lord Jesus Christ.

Feb 14, 2012 10:22 | 0 replies